Monday, July 9, 2012

Mohammed Mohammed
Intermediate Composition 4
July 9, 2012
If I Could Change My Country

            As Ms. Tong said, every country has good points and bad points.  When we talk about that, we mean the people who live in that country.  For example, my country, Iraq, is one of the richest countries in the world.  It has natural resources that guaranty high standards of living for each person; however, the Iraqi people are suffered of poverty and the financial and administrative corruption.  In addition, the bad status of the hospitals and the shortage of the health equipment make people go to other countries which are poorer than in Iraq to find the health treatment.  There are also many other things that need to be changed, but if I have the opportunity to change something, I would improve the health aspect.

1 comment:

  1. Yes, that is very important for the people's well-being. Good idea. Healthcare should be #1.

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